FinFun Presents a Mermaid Story by Royal Mermaiden Zoey
“…Twenty-nine…Thirty! Ready or not, here he comes!” I called out.
Quickly I ducked back into my hiding spot. Cooper, my little turtle finfriend, was seeking for all us hiders. We were in the middle of a pretty intense game of hide-and-seek, my finfriends and I. In all, there were about twelve of us for Cooper to find. There are lots of clown fish playing, along with dolphins, some jellyfish, and a couple other types of fish. I love playing games with all types of finfriends!
My royal Mermaiden power is to control animals. They listen to me and have to do as I say, but I usually don’t make them do much unless they’re fighting. I hate watching animals fight, so I use my powers to calm them down and remind them to be kind to one another! The best way to do that is through games, in my opinion.
Speaking of games, I watched Cooper slowly making his way through the reef’s best hiding places. He sure is a good seeker! I crouched a little lower in my own hiding spot. I was situated in a long patch of seaweed at the bottom of the shallow part of our reefs. The seaweed was long enough to hide me and hidden enough not to be obvious! I was determined to win this game.
As I waited for Cooper to find me, I heard laughing a little ways off. Making sure that no one could see me, I pulled some of the grass out of the way and peered out into the ocean beyond the coral reef. Just then, a group of young mermen passed by my hiding spot. They were laughing and goofing around. I recognized them from around the kingdom. There was one merman in particular that I like to watch. He’s my latest splash. That’s what young merfolk call others our age that we think are cute. I never told anyone but Cooper about my splash, but I figure humans and merfolk need to learn to trust each other, so I’ll start off trusting you with my little secret.
The first time I saw him was while I was playing a different game of hide-and-seek. We were near my coral castle and it was just Cooper and me. I’d picked a really good hiding place and Cooper was having a tough time finding me. I’m not super patient, so after a while I was about to go find him. All of a sudden, I saw a little conch shell whiz past my hiding place in the kelp gardens. Then, there he was, chasing after it. He was so finsome! He was fast, too. Probably almost as fast as me! I wanted to duck out of my hiding place and say hello but suddenly, I got nervous and I couldn’t think of a single thing to say! That was so unlike me! Usually, I have a smart response for anything anyone throws my way. But that day in the gardens, I found myself tongue-tied. By the time I could finally get my thoughts together, he had disappeared as fast as he had come. I still wished I had said something, even now. Then maybe I could be out there playing games and laughing with him, too.
I watched curiously as he laughed with his mermates, joking and throwing conch shells around. I wished that I could join in! But what would I say? And, I reminded myself, the other mermaids and mermen are usually a little intimidated by me because I’m the princess. I sighed and really wished that could change. I love my power but it is a little lonely being me sometimes.
Just then, I felt something hit the back of my head. “Ouch!” I yelled, reaching back to find the culprit. The little shape was twisting through my light brown hair and I had to wrestle with it to get it out. Finally, I yanked the mischievous offender out of my hair and brought him to eye level. Cooper clucked his delight and studied his reflection in my light brown eyes. I chuckled and sat up in the grass, still holding him out in my hands. Above us, I saw all our other finfriends gathered, which meant I was the winner of our hide-and-seek game!
Suddenly, I heard some commotion coming from behind us, back in the direction of my splash and his mermates. As I turned to see what it was, I quickly tried to think of what I would say to him. But when I saw them, they weren’t looking at us at all. They had their backs to us and were staring down two enormous tiger sharks.
The long, hungry fish were making slow circles around the boys, making it impossible for them to swim away without getting caught. Sharks are usually not very interested in us merfolk, and I was surprised at their behavior! Sometimes they will attack if they’re starved or sick, but we’re the faster swimmers. I knew I had to do something… fast.
Quicker than one of those kangaroos on land—which I hear are pretty fast—I dove up and over the circle of mermen and headed right for the sharks. That got their attention alright. They stopped their prowling and glared up at me. I quickly looked right into their eyes and said in a commanding voice, “Behave yourselves, Mates! What’s gotten into you?! Swim away now, and don’t come back!”
The sullen sharks knew they had to obey me, but they didn’t have to be happy about it! I put my hands on my hips and watched them go. They left slowly, and I could see the tension in the mermen’s shoulders leave with them. Soon, they were just dark shadows disappearing into the ocean.
“She’s the Mermaiden,” I heard someone whisper. I turned around and as all three mermen immediately gasped and bowed from the waist. I tried not to groan. I know they have to bow to me because of my title, but sometimes it just feels so awkward.
After a few minutes of their rapid apologies for not recognizing me sooner and oh so many thank yous, I cut them off by raising my hand, just like my mermom had taught me.
“I accept your gratitude, loyal subjects,” I said in my most regal voice. I didn’t know what else to say! Secretly, I wished with all my heart they would just ask me to play their game with them. I glanced wistfully at the conch shell in one of the mermen’s hands.
“Please, Your Highness, what can we do to repay you for saving our lives?” my splash asked, looking at me with those big, dreamy sea green eyes. That was a good enough invitation for me! I grabbed the conch shell from the other boy’s hands and held it up.
“Let me play?” I realized how unprincess-like it sounded, but the shock in all three mermen’s eyes made me laugh instead of fix the sentence as my mermom would have done. Then my splash and his friends started laughing too, and without another word, we began to play.
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Jan 24, 2017 at 8:15 am
so nice! I love these stories!
Jan 8, 2017 at 1:15 pm
Zoey really has a crush?
Dec 24, 2016 at 8:58 am
That story was so good! I am a lot like Zoey cause we both love animals!
Nov 17, 2016 at 9:38 pm
I love that story
Nov 17, 2016 at 9:37 pm
Oct 21, 2016 at 2:56 am
I love it!!!
Oct 12, 2016 at 8:04 pm
i don`t like all of them at all
Mar 7, 2017 at 3:24 pm
Oct 10, 2016 at 8:53 pm
I LOVE all the mermaidens, but scarlet Is the most like me…
Sep 11, 2016 at 11:06 am
i love zoey so much
Aug 19, 2016 at 9:11 pm
I LOVED that story!
Jul 23, 2016 at 7:42 am
That was an awesome story!
May 28, 2016 at 10:54 pm
‘The sullen sharks knew they had to obey me, but they didn’t have to be happy about it! I put my hands on my hips and watched them go. They left slowly, and I could see the tension in the mermen’s shoulders leave with them. Soon, they were just dark shadows disappearing into the ocean.’ was my favorite line. 10/10 guys. 10/10.
May 28, 2016 at 10:47 pm
Good job guys.
Aug 3, 2015 at 12:54 pm
Hey merfin friends
Mar 7, 2017 at 3:25 pm
Hey felow fin friend
Jul 19, 2015 at 12:29 pm
I have Zoey’s tail I love it I look exactly like Zoey too and i’m an animal lover!!!!
Aug 3, 2015 at 12:56 pm
I have Zoey’s mermaid tail. And my sissy has Crytal’s mermaid tail!
Jul 14, 2015 at 6:20 am
Zoey is the best! she is the most beautiful mermaiden in all of them she has awesome power and she has so cute and funny accent and her tail is awesome! i wish i had a tail like her’s! 😀 🙂 😀 🙂 😀 🙂 : ( ;D 😉
Jul 19, 2015 at 12:30 pm
I have her tail she IS the best
May 28, 2016 at 10:57 pm
You are wrong! Scarlet is the best! She is ten times prettier than all the other mermaidens combined. She has a mysterious past that has yet to be discovered! Get your facts straight!
Feb 5, 2017 at 3:31 pm
Ummmmmm different merfolk have different opinions OK! no need to be rude!
Mar 7, 2017 at 3:19 pm
you can like what you like and other merfolk can like what they like and all of the mermaidens are pretty your saying that the only opinions that matters is yours when truly not just yours matters everyone’s does so next time before you post a rude comment like that think twice!
Mar 7, 2017 at 3:24 pm
RUDE! and to be honest they all are pretty and dont ever say that about mermaidens again because its rude mean and wrong and Zoe is not even my favorite Brynn is im just defending mermaidens like they would do for me!
Mar 7, 2017 at 3:26 pm
the other mermaidens are pretty to
Jun 23, 2015 at 5:20 pm
I’m selling stuff to get her tail!!!!!!!! SO EXCITED
Jun 18, 2015 at 9:29 pm
I think her tail is so cool.im getting it for my birthday.icant wait
Jul 19, 2015 at 12:31 pm
I got it for my birthday it’s so cool
Jun 18, 2015 at 9:28 pm
I think zoeys tail is awesome.i love it.im getting it for my birthday.i can’t wait
Jun 6, 2015 at 11:13 am
Zoey is my favorite princess out of all of them! she pretty, she loves animals, and she’s pretty much like me! i am really good with animals, and i am pretty active. i love playing games with me cats. i also love the ocean! i am dying to get a mermaid tail for myself! if i do get one here i’ll get Zoey’s!
May 21, 2015 at 5:27 pm
hey sis I have the same tail you know
May 15, 2015 at 7:50 pm
Well, then you cut my tail off, finfriend. They always spell my name wrong! I still have the conch shell, too. Ya want it?
Jul 11, 2014 at 9:04 pm
I have Zoey’s tail.
Jun 23, 2015 at 5:21 pm
Jul 19, 2015 at 12:33 pm
its soooooooooo pretty I have it
May 26, 2014 at 1:27 pm
I love mermaids and this is my dream. Zoey is a pretty princess.
May 22, 2014 at 10:42 pm
I love zoey
Jun 16, 2015 at 10:50 am
Yeah, Zoe is pretty cool, I wish I could be that bold.
Feb 5, 2017 at 3:33 pm
I am like that I have a green Pink tail almost like Zoe’s